Comments : Courage

  • 18 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    Wooahh..#1 i can tell you ahve a lot to say about the world and how selfish it is which i can totally relate to and agree. i really think the most powerful verse in this poem would be
    The world was once a rose,
    But now is choked by its own thorns.
    Its beauty overshadowed be evil,
    And caught between Satan's horns.
    that is such a beautiful metephor. i like your vocabulary in this poem, the descriptive words u used aswell:).. i really enjoy ur poetry aswell and no ur not freaking me out at all:P i look forward to reading ur comments:) id actually liek to get to knoe u a bit better!..keep in touch!:> elisa-

  • 18 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    By the way, i was wondering who sings the song caroline, im interested to hear it!:)

  • 18 years ago

    by +HISblood=Mylife+

    This is an amazing poem and very true. I'm happy to know that you have hope in God, even when the it seems that this cold world is falling even further than it has. thank you so much for you comment it means alot.
    Godbless,
    erica

  • 18 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    Hey anton! how are you?:) thats great:P lol i listened to that song-great choice of music! i really liked it and i see how u related it to my poem. i like the singers voice a lot, its so soothing. my fave part is
    And when you're feeling all alone and you can't go on
    Remember I am here
    And when you think you've gone too far
    I'll meet you where you are
    My arms are open wide

    i love it! lol im listening to it again right now:) i didnt let the christian part throw me off either:P..do u by chance have an email? msn?..get back to me!:)..ttyl!..Elisa*

  • 18 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    Hey anton: my email is bal.02@hotmail.com..i added u on msn!

  • 17 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    AWESOME
    i love it.
    ur an awesome writer. and thanks for commenting on my poem

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    Another beautifully written and inspiring piece! love it! xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Mihaela

    I like this poem a lot.Congratulations,you have done a good work.You're a great poet.Best regards,Michelle XxX