This is great.I love how you used the cliche subject to convey something we have all felt, yet it's done in a such a fresh(non-cliched-lol) way.A very heartfelt and touching piece.The use of the last line in the first stanza as the last line in the final stanze is superb, really gives it impact.

Love is simply that.... living the cliche.... great job

Simply wonderful, superlative write Ariana!!!