by eric
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Hey i liked it a lot good job 5/5 |
by Royal
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I loved how tied being cradled in the arms of love to the storm. My guess is the storm is the rest of the world and being cradled in the arms of love is the person that you have this unconditional love for. It was a great poem over all and i give you a 5/5 keep up the good work. |
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Hey, i really liked this poem, u did a great job on it, as of many of ur others. Thanx for ur comments on my poem, i really appreciate that people like my poetry. |
by Heather
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GREAT JOB! I LOVE THIS! IT"S REALLY DEEP AND TOTALLY AWSOME! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! |
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Wow, i really liked this poem. Every line flowed perfectly and i love the way you rhymed it. The ending was my favorite part thought, it wrapped everything up beautifully. Great work |
by Mel
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You write very well and I can feel the storms of the past within your work. I find your profile poetic: 'lonliness is my trademark'. There's something Johnny Cash about that if you follow my drift. Well done, glad I checked you out after you left a comment on mine. |
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Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us |
by Amadeous
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Standing ovation, rainbow. You did a stupendous job! 5 stars. |
by Bhavin
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This poem is quite different than the previous ones. it has a hidden meaning in it. Wow... u r tempting me to give u on 5/5. |
by Mustardhart
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This is splendid. i feel the flow of verse 4 come in as a prophecy. Nicely written. |
by Ana
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Wow. Very Moving. I really like it! 5/5 |
by Vyntrrose
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This is a great poem! I like how it shows both the bad and the good of storms. The ending really wraps it up nicely. |
by A Red Rose
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You make peolpe feel your words rainbowslider |
by Cindy
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This is a wonderful poem. I really am glad I got the pleasure of reading your work. |
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Hii dear friend |
by ..eliSa*
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HEy Roy..i just wanted to say that i love thie poem and all of your work..i also wanted to congradulate you for your accomplishment with stayiong sober..good for you! i hope you are still doing well:)..smile* |
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There isn't anything more romantic than being with the love of your life during a thunder storm... Awesome job... |
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I loved it! very good! |
by Lonely Rider
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So beautiful .... n so hearfelt...loved it... n the last line is simply awesome.. it adds so much beauty to the poem... |
by huddy
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I sense a lot of despair yet such great tranquility even in the storm. Very well thot!!! |