Comments : Times

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacy May

    I love it. I really do.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    You might want to correct those spelling mistakes :) they kind of take a bita way from the beautiful words you chose.

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    All i noticed was a couple of spelling mistakes
    Apart from that, plenty of beauty =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I loved this one.. love poems dont usually capture my attention unless they have a sad theme to them..but this one was so sweet and innocent and the way it was written reminded me of how beautiful love can really be when its true.. thanx for makine me belive in true love again after all of these years.. nice job.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Wow, this poem was amazing. So sweet and very beautifully
    Written. You expressed everything very well. I especially liked
    The two first lines. and…mm..I think there was a spelling mistake
    In the last line of the second stanza. “tear” not “tare”.
    You seem really talented. Keep it up.
    Much love,
    Marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Great j0b 0n this 0ne t0o darl. beautifully w0rded. heartfelt keep it up =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Aww - such a sweet poem :) There was just one line

    And the times I prayed that nothing would tare us apart

    I think 'tare' should be 'tear' - But apart from that, the flow, rhyming and rhythm is excellent :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    I love it.
    it flowed beautifully.
    the thoughts in it and the message were beautiful.
    and it was just really great.
    well done.
    Love,
    ALLY xx

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey, this one is really beautiful, very nicely penned, great flow.

    take care and all the best
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylalala

    Very good. You are a good writer and i am adding you to my favorites so i will probably comment on a lot of yours. Thanx for the comment on mine.
    xxKaylaXX

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very strong poem. Great consistant flow and rhymes. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by dezi

    Wow your poem blew me away. I love your writing style, you bring your words to life. Wonderful job, I loved it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    Wow such an honest display of emotions,,really like your poem,,
    thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot,,,,
    all the best

    Amira
    always smile :)

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This is a sweet and heartfelt poem. You kept me reading right to the end, although in places due to the long lines the flow was lost a little.
    First stanza third line i think you meant "begins" rather than "beings."
    I thought it was written well and the rhyme wasn't forced however in places I feel it became a tad predictable.
    Good job, keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    This poem was Amazing
    Excellent Flow
    Excellent Rhyme
    Excellent Message in your love
    Wonderful Job
    keep up the great work
    5/5
    ~TBOY~

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Hey dear I love the poem :) Add me you lamoose

  • The memories you say in you rpoems are similar to my memories i share with my boyfriend of a year!! You did a fantastic Job!! Truely loved it!! 6/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    OMG this is so nice! I love this poem so much! I can relate like yeah I just can't explain it how it relates! But it does! I love everything bout it! Well you had some spelling mistakes but even though you did I still understood it and loved it! Love is and feels so good when it's true! I love how everything was written! I just added you in my favorites! Love it! 5/5! Take care!
    ~*~Cindy~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I like this poem. I thought it was cute and adorable, The flow and wording was once again perfectly. Great Write.

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Another great poem.. you have some excellent writing.. i am reading em all lol 5/5