I love your poem. I can relate to everything that's in there. great job!

I love your poem :P

Farooq, that has to be the best poem of yours that I have ever read. Each stanza held a new story and a new identity, telling of what emotions it had captured inside your memories.
Excellent work, well done =D.

Much love and God bless,
FalLEn*-

Hey I loved that poem and I hope to see you somrtime in the chatroom. 5/5 from me!
Love ya!

*Laura*

Thats so touching hun keep it all up x 5/5

Positive spin on a not so positive experience. I really like this....we have to learn from our experiences...and share them with others. You have acomplished this.

Godbless

Sammib

Hey..i mis ya...but anywayz awsum work...as usual hehe love dia mwaz

Awww this is a sad bu8t amazingly written poem, great work xx

Awww this is a sad but amazingly written poem, great work xx

Very nice poem
5/5

Wow i love it reminds me of my ex! wen we wer happy wer very happy n so much in love but wen we broke up it was nasty n very messy! luv the poem! xxx

Very wonderful.
I just went through something a lot like that and you wrote the feelings in it so great. Look forward to talking to you again and keep up the great work.
Morgana

This is awesome!..I love it. <3 =]