You poem is very nice, but most of all motavating. its like a anti sucide poem, i like that

Wow!
that was really something!!

Wow dat was a good poem! if i was going to kill myself that poem would make me think twice.
5/5 = )

Hey,
i really liked the message your trying to send out with this poem. But depression is an illness... inside suicide is never the answer yet sometimes it feels like the only way to well escape. like the end stanza, that just seems really impossible for many people out there.
Anywyas ill talk about the acctual poem now, it has a good flow, and the rhymes were ok. Some of them i just think you wanted them to rhyme and couldnt think of another word though. i htought you oculd of chnaged the structure a little, it owuld make it more appealing to the reader. The long lines, if you could split them into two or something? Still a good poem had an ok flow. keep writing! xx

I like this poem alot it makes me realise that suicide will never be an option its, awesome!