Comments : Driven by fear

  • 17 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    Excellent

  • 17 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    Yes this is excellent, the short lines are very effective, in ways i could never write!!

    I realy, realy liked it!!

    Jon
    x
    (thankyou for your comment also.)

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephy

    Hey!
    I was all happy to see you had a new one!
    So true, it,s kinda sad when you think about it though.
    Once again I loved it!
    luv ya-xxx-

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    This is sad but touching. i love it as always. you are an incredible writer mona!! i love all of your poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty

    Wow!!
    mona I've been away for awhile
    and I come back and firstly go straight to your page as I love your written; once again you've smitten me with words!!
    A nice welcome back to read your new stuff I hope I can get back into the swing of writing
    well done
    lovies to you xxxxxxxx mwah xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Mona sweetie!!!
    wut a touching piece!!!
    I luved it and I do luv ur work. u r so brilliant and I wish you the best it wud be!!!
    than-Q huni for ur sweet comments I'm okay those weex r passing slowly but with my boyfriend I feel okay for sure!
    Luv you always and forever
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Exactly this fear nice poem u should read my poem about fear except its a little longerthan yours any how nice poem 5/5 go fish bowl

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    KoOl. So awesome. this is my kind of poem. i LOVE it!

    always, Suzie

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, this is fantastic! Love the rhyme, it made the whole poem flow flawlessly. Love the subject too, excellent write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Laasya

    Loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    This poem was very true, and really good, i give it a 5/5 thanks for the comment on my poem. i think im going to add you to my favorites.

    [:

    this poem can't get any better

  • 17 years ago

    by Ric Hansen

    Very expressive...definitive! I just put you in my favorites. Can I get your comments on my stuff? I'm a rookie but would respect your opinion very much. Bravo!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    So few words express so much. Excellent job on this, Mona!!

  • 17 years ago

    by teri finch

    Alsome

  • 17 years ago

    by BlEEdInHeArT911

    Wow that waz a relli good poem uwrote

    ♥
    BlEEdinhEarT911

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Very nice poem. Sweet and simple.
    Creative and very different. Awesome work. Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Excellent- i loved it! very very good!

    keep writing!

    lonelynow xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by heartbrOken

    Ur lyk a great writer!