This poem was absolutely beautiful. The way you described everything was very talented. great job.

Wow that was a really good keep up the good work 5/5

I wish I could use imagery in my poems the way you do. I can only do it if I'm writing a short story

5/5

4 feelings, 1 poem, 1 very good writer. The four snapshots thing works well. Very good job of conveying each.

I've read this poem before, and i loved it then and still love it now, xxx