Comments : Sweet Amy Was Told...

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    OMG That was so good! I really liked it. Im not too much of a fan to really long poems, But this one kept my attention all they way through, I really enjoyed reading it.. Cant wait to read the next part =] 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant poem. it maintains interest very strongly thoughout not allowing attentin to waver at any point. brilliant imergy and very well written thoughout

  • 17 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    I loved this one i dont think you should change anything. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha

    I like a lot of the images you present in the poem, but it didn't flow to me. I still really, really liked it...but it just didn't feel right. Don't get me wrong, it's one of the best poems I've read in a long time, I just think YOU could do even better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Absoutly beautifully written. I loved it. this poem has amazing flow. good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    Awww....its so sweet....i cant wait to read the second part i am right on it...
    Emma 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Fantastic... great job, keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wicked, it was brilliant, loved it, am going to read second part now
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose

    Wow, you have great talent, your choice of words is excellent...

  • 17 years ago

    by littlballa

    Wow great poem and extremely touching..so much great imagery. you are very talented

  • 17 years ago

    by amber

    Aww it is so wonderful very descriptive and i can totally undrstand it is sweet i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    I loved the sweet amy story, it was really quite brilliant, that word being mine of highest praise, but the ending bothered me a bit. I know it was your intention to switch to the next one, but it just . . . died for me with that ending. It was so good and then . . . like someone crossed out the rest and said here is a finished poem. Sorry love.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem is so sad! I almost cried! I really loved it! The flow was good & the imagery was great too. I love the way you ended it. great job! 5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassandra Wojick

    I really liked it, great job...5/5