I think it's amazing. You've outdone yourself Ruby. Really, really good. Incredible.
Always, Suzie

Omg, thats makes me wont to cry!
i absolutely loved it Ruby!!
thank you
Love
~Em

I loved the imagry that it had I think you did a great job keep it up!! ^_^

This poem is simply beautiful. i hope u "won" ur game great poem

my fav line

like drops of blood on pure white skin
these perfumed petals do lie

This was beautiful for a nature poem. It might have been written for the poetry game, right? But it stands as a wonderful poem on it's own. I think you'd maybe extended it a bit, it might be better. But even as a short poem, it's really sweet.

Wowo great imagery. i love it. i can see all of it. its great.

This poem was reely gd, lved it!!!!!!!!

Its beautiful. I loved it.. great imagry, you paint a very vivid picture with your words.