This poem is absolutely BEAUTIFUL. i loved it. it was so full of emotion. Great job! keep up the good work. 5/5*

It's cute and sweet like a dream but even we have to wake up to find that not everyone is going to be like that. But while in the mean time I prefer your little dream world right there.

I liked the organization and the imagery. Or maybe that's just my overreacting imagination. Ryhmes were good then shifted here and there but still remained great. I don't know much to say but it was pretty cute in a I-wish-I-had-that romantic sort of way.

Awwwwwww..... This poem is so romantic! It sounded so sweet and thoughtful, though it seemed short to me. I loved it. heheh ^-^

-Artimis-

Its a very good poem, i enjoyed reading it, it was well written.
keep up the good work, i love reading your poems
xxxxx

I love the use of the night, so much more romantic than the day.
There wasn't really a rhyme sceme, but then again there doesn't need to be.
"soft melody" I loved that phrase, music/poems always work well when in poetry
Great job :)

I enjoyed reading this...it was so well writen....nice job...
Emma 5/5

As we walk
hand in hand
I ask you this
as you look at the stars

i really like this stanza again 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Soo sweet. and romantic. nice job.

Omg, sweetie! this is soooo great! it gave me the shivers it was so pretty! **5/5** hun!

LOVE
Lolli

Aw wow! That was really good. && Sweet!! I really liked it. Im just lost for words lol, Theres not one thing that needs to be changed, I think its perfect the way it is. Great job 5/5

luv natalie x-x

This was very romantic the structure to me was fluid with passion and romance....very well written. My only advice would be perhaps some punctuation in places to give parts more impact...otherwise amazing!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow unique poem but nevertheless its very good =) i loved it =) 5/5

~StefQ

What a poem, so lovely with beautiful emotion penned....

have a good day!

I love it it is great you are very talented good job i totally understand it

Aweh aweh this is abosoluteely amazing

hehe its so cute.
wow brought a little tear to my eye cuz
its like so romantic
this is great 5/5 no doubt

Aww, i like this poem its really sweet and innocent, and the rhyming works really well, the structure/rhythm seems a bit random tho, but overall its a wonderful piece xx

Ugh. i have actually given up o love all together.... and this is a very sweet poem. There NEEDS to be more guys like this in the world!! good job! 5/5 :D

Heya.
I loved this, I loved the speed of the writing..short sentences and everything!
Really made it powerful.
Your flow was good and made it easy to read, & I really loved the ending made me feel fuzzy inside.

Lol.

Well done, I enjoyed reading the whole thing so I re read it XD

x

Wow i love your poem

Oh it's so cute!!! very romantic