Ouch. ok, that was harsh and very kool at the same time. i liked it. very well written.
Ruby, you're the cream of teh crop, the hip in the hop, the spin in the top... ummmm.... the lamb to teh chop. LOl
well done.
-Suzie

Reminds me of a girl i know......i wonder who it could be?
hey i think i know what this is about, he's not worth it Rubz
You rock my world anyway and always will.
cya round,
love,
~Emma

Omg that so sad. there are actually tears in my eyes.

Wow i had to comment again,
reminds me of some crap that happened a couple of months ago, i wonder what it could be?
love
~Em

Wow. I loved how you did this poem, very creative, and I must say the flow was great. :)

That is such a powerful poem

Oh my goodness i have goosebumps.. this is soo sad but really great .. i love these lines

"Lips bright red, eyes painted
Every inch prepared"

and

"Running blind, mascara running
Through tears you can not see"

i dontknow why lol but their really good.. your just a really great writer, i love the poems ive read so far.. you have a load of talent.. !