Comments : Beneath Guiding Lights

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Wow Kaylee. This, this is very deep. I loved it, just like alot of the other poems you have written. It was different from the rest, which makes it sound so beautiful. Your words tell that you have much greater whisdom that you haven't yet revealed to anyone else. I wish I could see just how great a whisdom that was.

    -a friend-
    Artimis

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Deep, beautiful, emotional and poweful. An incredibly written piece. Your words so carefully chosen. A very good write :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow this poem was soooo amazing.. you had an excellent choice of words.. excellent job.. 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is an amazing poem, I really enjoyed reading it. Beautiful! Keep writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by fallen angel

    The lexical choice in this poem is very good. It is very beautiful and full of emotion, which is what i like to see. keep it up x

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, great write. I loved it. Very emotion filled. Great Job. Keep up the amazing peices of work.

    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by LiL K

    All I can say after I read your poems is "wow.." You're such a talented writer and this poem is very powerful. There's so much emotion that I can actually feel the words.

    "Kiss the wounds from my body that
    had been engraved there by another.
    Suffering innocence being violated
    Bacteria poison from his words."

    This stanza was amazing...I can relate. Keep up the awesome work Kaylee, I love it! 5/5

    ~Kelly~

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful sad penned, very touching with every line, anyway congrat from me, have a good day!

    Love & peace.

    bert.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Loves Not

    Pour these tears into the clouds above
    then let them shatter to the floor.

    I'm not sure why, but i got the whole meaning of this poem through the simplicity of these two lines.

    You are a great poet, and I thoroughly enjoy reading your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Wow, you really express yourself well. Good Imagery. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully conveyed with such sad undertones, quite heartbreaking. I absolutely love the imagery conveyed througout this piece. So enchanting.
    This stanza really stood out to me....

    "Restore the image from my mirror
    that might have remained smudged.
    Silver vials glimmering in the closet
    holding droplets of stained faith."

    Well done! Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Wonderfully written with good progression. very powerful and excellently convayed thoughout

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    So beautifully written - you never cease to amaze me :) This poem was exceptionally well written . . .

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    Wha

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    What to say, this poem is so beautiful that it made me speechless... i love the use of words and this poem is so deep, and so well written =) keep up the good work ;) 5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Wow its wonderful i love it i know ive said it alot but its true very descriptive you have a way with words good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    That poem was BEAUTIFUL!! The last two lines really brought it all together. & the wording you used was very imaginative. great job!! 5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Wow thats intense. i like it. i just all these images flying at me. great choice of words. i love :
    Kiss the wounds from my body that
    had been engraved there by another.
    and
    Silver vials glimmering in the closet
    holding droplets of stained faith.
    great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Good choice of words...just overal pretty good. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Allen

    Very nicely written poem. Great choice of words whilst expressing yourself very well.. That was a great poem. Keep it up