A great poem, tells a wonderful story, filled with fantastic imagery. you have an amazing imagination. just one thing though - i think it would be better if 'what will tomorrow bring' was 'what tomorrow will bring'...it seems to fit better throughout the whole poem...

I really liked this poem. I enjoyed all the imagery and how you made it come to life... good job.

Well written with good progression thoughout. the story is very clearly told and the writting flows well.

Absolutely love it..keep up the good work.. I mean GREAT WORK!!!!

This is good. i like how you use the same words at the end of each part. i like the story to.

That was a wonderfully written poem.. I really really like it. keep it up. well done. love the use of words, love the flow, rhymes.. every part of that poem. especially the last stanza. Good job....

Wow..nice one,i like this one alot... thx for ur last comment,keep ur good job,peace(yuniardi) :)

A earthy princess with clover eyes
sits atop her gray stone castle tower
the wind carries away her endless sighs
and she thinks what will tomorrow bring

that stanza is my favorite out of all the poem. you are so gifted with putting pictures into your poems. i really enjoy reading your stuff, you're a unique writer

Hey this was certainly a very beautiful poem, really liked the way u wrote it.

all the best and take care
5/5

A lovely fairytale write with a slight twist(the dream career of the princess).
It was well written, had good use of language and it kept me interested from beginning to end.
The only bad point is I picked out a few silly mistakes in there that could do with being fixed.
The very first word of the poem should be "An."
Second stanza, third line, the "is" needs to be removed.
Sixth stanza, first line, you have a double plural, so it should be "bells ring."
Good job anyway, keep writing.

This poems was so lovely. I liked the whole idea behind it and I think that you are a great poet. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Its really good, its imaginative and the idea behind it is different. keep it up
xxxxx

Really a good poem. Nice rhythm and nice theme. A lovely work!

Theres some nice imagry, and good word usage, but all in all, not really one of your best imo

Loved it! Indeed Lovely. I would just say keep writing and share your imagination because you got the talent.

Great poem.... I still see her sitting in that opening looking across the green lands.

A lot of discription! great job!