Oooh, I love this. It kinda makes me think of a ghost ship...very eerie.
Lovely flow as always and the emotion is always prominent.
Keep it up~Holly

Wow, I really like this poem. The message is great and the flow seems so natural!

This poem is amazing, i had this detailed picture in my mind the entire time and it never lost my attention. i love how you ended it and plus it's quiet an interesting title.

~Jacklyn

To quote a commercial..."BRIlLIANT!" I think this poem is very publishable. Have you tried to submit it to any contests or magazines or such.

"crazy on a ship of fools...." it's a song, and now it's in my head. this really is a good piece of writing

Soo lovely its breath taking 5/5 !

A very strong ending and a magnificient poem!