Comments : The Ship and the Lost Soul

  • 17 years ago

    by Tripp

    The ship glides across the long darkened sea
    Its sharpened silhouettes soaring high
    The sails spreading as far as my ambitions
    Me, standing alone, a desperate cry

    words aren't enough to describe this poem in its, 'awesome-ness' lol. you continue to amaze and suprise me. you are what true poets are made of, and could definitely make money off this stuff if you worked on it, and published your stuff. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily

    When I read this poem, I was like, "Wow, that's good," and I looked at the title, and I'm like THAT TITLE IS PERFECT, lol. It's probably my favorite poem of yours, great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    I could sit and read your poetry all day, as it is I'm actually at school doing this so I probably shouldn't =P, Another great write though! Can't fault it at all, everything works so beautifully! Another 5/5 x

  • 17 years ago

    by mier

    This poem is so surreal.. you have such an amazing imagination. :)