Good peice, very well written and expressive. if these are true feelings (which i think they are in order to be expressed so brilliantly) then i truely hope that you feel better soon

I love your poem it may be shourt but it gets to the point. keep writing ~silent eyes~

Its A good write i dunno if the title fits though just a sugestion either write your poem then title it or title a poem then write around it ok just an idea Its still a good poem

Mike

I agree with † Bleeding Demons † I think the title doesnt fit try something like Uncontrollable. Just a thought.

Rach ♥

Hope everything is okay.

Your title needs to be different i believe. other than that i like your poem. good work.xoxo

Pretty good poem.. not too long not too short..perfect. very well written.. keep it up.
dee