This is very touching and so good. Is it based on a true event. I hope you didnt hurt yourself. I really enjoyed it. But also felt scared for you. God bless. And stay safe. Plzzz read some of my quotes.

This has to be one of the greatest poems i've read

its mixed with different emotions, and truly has good meaning.

and it has good rhythm! its a really good poem!

This poem show love and in love grief.
love make a life or destroy.

Its okay repitition is okay but you kinda killed it in this one.

Thats was really good

Hey like your poems too it has a lot of feeling in it good job!!! you should write some more

read and coment my poems

peace out~~~ linda

Wow that's really good! i like it a lot

Deadly realy good very well