Comments : Leaving you an out

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This was really good.. I love the way that you ended it. The flow and rhythm of it was really good.. and it held such strong emotions. Great job on this!

  • 17 years ago

    by Martyna

    Even if I read this poem randomly, not knowing it was by you, it would definitely put your face in my mind. Its written very well, the flow is what I like best about it. I dont even need to tell you that you have talent.