"I gladly accept the night's gentle kiss"
I LOVE this line. I love the whole poem. It's amazingly written!
I share your appreciation for sunsets. They truly are God's gift =)
Keep up the good work and take care!
God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Wow! amazing! beautiful, vivid imagery. I especially like the first stanza where you have personified the sun.

wonderful reading your work again.

love and peace
shobhana

Beautiful language, you're writing is very well crafted! No critisim, I can't find anything wrong with it. Great description, very vivid and alive. An excellent piece, keep it up!

Thats cool how you wrote it 5/5
great !

Comment #5:
Oooh! Very cool! Very serene feel to this one. Great job!
~Midnight Sun

Nicely penned form with beautiful imagery. Great job!