Wow....I am speechless. I gasped at the turning point of the poem. I am now in love with your poem. Is it ok if I put this poem on my website??
Check mine out sometime.
Morana

Wow i really like this one..keep up the great work

xoxo Sarah

Omg thats so sad...but i really like the flow of the poem 5/5

Yooo! i like that it was sad, but i gotta ask was that true?

I like it :)

Amazing poem..i reallyyy liked it!

xX-Katherine-Xx

BOY, do I LOVE a good tragedy! 5/5, my talented friend!

I like this............ is it true

This is a very good poem it reminds me of a shooting near where i live!!!
5/5
~sara~

This is my favorite poem on this whole website, im like obsessed with it lol. it rocksss. keep writing =)

WOW! that was really good!! i luv how u write ur poemz so descriptive without saying too much, but u say it perfectly for ppl to understand, unlike i can do! lol...thx for the comment tho n if u wanna talk sum time, i'm here for u too! take care! luvz!
*Jo*

Omg this poem was great it nearly made me cry!! all your poems are excellent they have such emotion in them! i wish i could write as fluently as you!!
5/5 luv DarkCookie

That was a beautiful piece of poetry you captured the moment and emotions so well. congrats on such a great poem. loved it! 5/5

OMG I DONT KNOW WHAT TO EVEN SAY !!! YOUR A DAMN GOOD WRITER