I really like this poem. It's just like me, a smile to hide the pain. Good job.

Wow that is really good.. the flow and rhythm was perfect and really held up well.. You portrayed your emotions really good and it's something that I'm sure many people can relate to. you did a great job on this. I loved it!

Like the other commenters, I can relate to it, and I think that it was excellently written. 5/5, keep it up.
(And thanks for the comment)

Aww.. very nice poem! it was sad but really told us what you were trying to say..it flowed well and there was a lot of emotion! good write! 5/5

This was so good. I can relate so much. Speshly the two middles stanza's. Really good poem, With alot of emtions. Keep it up =P 5/5

`taleee xx

That's a really deep poem. Inspired by My Chemical Romance much?..

This poem had such a deep meaning... such deep emotions... your a great poet and dont let anyone tell you different :D -Jen-

Man do i feel like this sometimes!
Great poem, really deep and very immense emotion, fantastic piece

Nice poem. I really liked it, good job. "But i always put on a smile.'' - I feel that

Excellent!

I really like this one, it shows true emotion and it is really true, everyones life is a lie and we all try and hide it behind a smile. but not always do people belive that smile, it was really good

Kristy

Beautiful poem!