"But instead you stay srong." should be 'strong'

"But you pretend that it don't bother you."
should be 'doesn't', not 'don't'

You rhymed in the first and third stanza, but not the second and fourth. I felt like the lines had so little in common as far as rhythm that a bit of rhyme could help out, so maybe you should consider rhyming some of the parts of the second and fourth stanza. I thought the repitition was relatively effective, and wouldn't change it.

In your eyes,
I can see that you're depressed,
And no one notices that you are,
But that's because you hide it.
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Loved that stanza. Reminds me of something my ex-best friend said to me. Another really great poem though. You're a really talented writer. 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Omg this is wat my bf is going thro.

Gr8 poem i love it 5/5

Really good. I've tried to write something just like that and failed many times. Great job.

This poem is a little strange to me
i get the feeling and everything but i'm not a free verse writter i have a few poems but rhyme and rhythem is my forte (sp) any way i really couldn't vote fairly becaues i was fully in to it (SO SORRY) but i did see the imagary so good job