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Hey this was a really good poem. Ohh man, giggling girls! I use to hang out with a lot of them. I'm guessing this is a dance, or Prom night or something? Sounds very special, for a girl at least :P hehe good job though.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! That is so sweet. My older sister is getting married soon, And I can't wait lol. This poem was so good. And very sweet. I love weddings, there pretty tehe.
And I think I know what contest you entered this in, I hope you win =P Tehe 5/5
Aww, i loved this poem. it was so cute! I think it was very good. Way to go! *two thumbs up* read mine sometime I oculd use the comments
by gone back to him
Very good! my aunt just got married a few days ago, and I wish I could have read this poem sooner!
by Tainted Beauty
Aw, wow that was so adorable, you portrayed that day so well:) i really enjoyed reading it and I plan to read more of your work.
Love the similee in this poem, especially
"She is a vision in white
Like the first layer of snow
On a cold winter night"
This is a great piece of work. Keep working on your rythm and you'll be even better!
Yeah, great poem, keep up the good work.......dan.......
That was great, ps. are you on the internet write now
Aww! This poem is so sweet! Great Job!! Keep up the good work! 5/5 Your a wonderful writer!
by Jacqui Armstrong
Aw suck a beautiful poem. i loved it well done and so descriptive =D
keep it up
I loved this poem and i am getting married in a week... what u describe is exactely what im longing for! Thnx so much for the smile you brought to my face! Well done!
As soon as I begun reading this I knew it was a wedding by the way you had described events that had gone on.
The line "like a graceful ballerina" was a really beautiful images as i could picture her gracefully walking down the aisle.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that is sooo sweet!!! it made me smile, the whole time...Great job 5/5
Awww this just makes you excited to get married and makes you want to grow up..although I'd like to stay young for a while! Beautifully written, wonderfully pieced together!!
by Brittney Follett
Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!