Comments : Best Day of Her Life

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Hey this was a really good poem. Ohh man, giggling girls! I use to hang out with a lot of them. I'm guessing this is a dance, or Prom night or something? Sounds very special, for a girl at least :P hehe good job though.

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! That is so sweet. My older sister is getting married soon, And I can't wait lol. This poem was so good. And very sweet. I love weddings, there pretty tehe.

    And I think I know what contest you entered this in, I hope you win =P Tehe 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 11 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    Aww, i loved this poem. it was so cute! I think it was very good. Way to go! *two thumbs up* read mine sometime I oculd use the comments

  • 11 years ago

    by gone back to him

    Very good! my aunt just got married a few days ago, and I wish I could have read this poem sooner!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aw, wow that was so adorable, you portrayed that day so well:) i really enjoyed reading it and I plan to read more of your work.

    --Steph

  • 11 years ago

    by ---AL---

    Love the similee in this poem, especially
    "She is a vision in white
    Like the first layer of snow
    On a cold winter night"
    Good job...

  • 11 years ago

    by blarg

    This is a great piece of work. Keep working on your rythm and you'll be even better!

  • 11 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    Yeah, great poem, keep up the good work.......dan.......

  • 11 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    That was great, ps. are you on the internet write now

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww! This poem is so sweet! Great Job!! Keep up the good work! 5/5 Your a wonderful writer!

    -Stephanie-

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Aw suck a beautiful poem. i loved it well done and so descriptive =D
    keep it up

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Sophie

    I loved this poem and i am getting married in a week... what u describe is exactely what im longing for! Thnx so much for the smile you brought to my face! Well done!
    love
    soph

  • 11 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    As soon as I begun reading this I knew it was a wedding by the way you had described events that had gone on.

    The line "like a graceful ballerina" was a really beautiful images as i could picture her gracefully walking down the aisle.

    Nicely done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that is sooo sweet!!! it made me smile, the whole time...Great job 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Krissey

    Awww this just makes you excited to get married and makes you want to grow up..although I'd like to stay young for a while! Beautifully written, wonderfully pieced together!!
    -Krissey

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!