Oh!! wow this one is really long but worth reading it, i am sure that the ones who would read the complete poem cant leave without rating it, the imagination is just so powerful...beautifully written indeed.
WOW! that is by far the best first half of a poem i have ever had the pleasure to come across 55555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555/5
This was a really good poem! I`m so looking forward to reading the sequal. The rhyming you chose was great ;; and the flow was perfect! It really grasped my attention the whole time, and I completely understood the intent. It was a terrific poem - I`d count on this being top rated. Great job, 5/5. Going to read the sequal.