Aww this is really sad ='[
bur you are an amazing writer
greatwork keep it up =]
5/5
lovelove
Alice
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Wow! I could not believe this came from someone your age. It was so sad but so is life sometimes. Thank you for reading and commenting on mine.

Wow, that was really sad .... it was an amazing poem but it was sad ... I loved it 5/5

I seriously got chills. the end was so unexpected. but that definitely matches. because a person's end is so unexpected. beautiful poem.

WOW!! I got goosebumps. That is an amazing poem. Extremely sad, but extremely good!!!! It all flows together so well. The concept is very good and its very interesting. Just so sad. Great writing though.