This poem's so sweet, I love it. I also liked the length of the lines, and the rhyming was good.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Keep the life in your touch, the love in your heart, and never cry,
[I loved this line]

This is a really good poem... Excellent job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Very sweet and i loved this poem..nice job ur other ones very nice as well

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

Well done, i loved that one, the only thing i could say is put it into stanza's, the set up of this one, rocked it slightly, but still good
xxxxx

Another great poem, you have a nice talent and you write very well.
keep it up
5/5

OMG!! It was so sweet!!! And the two final lines were especially brilliant! It was so cute that it really made me smile...A lovely piece of work , ill try to read much more poems of yours because I really like the way you write...So emotional!
Anyway, keep writing like that and ill make sure you are on my favourite list!
Love,5/5

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

I loved this poem. I loved what it said. I think we have all been there... done that. Great job 5/5 Loretta