Hey wow that was amazing.. great job. i rele love it.. its so powerful and sad.. but its good. keep writing
angie

Good dark poem I love it, plus it shows emotion and you remind me of me a bit. Hope you ok too but keep up the good work, also keep up the good twist in your poems and knowing when not to over complicate things. You got a good fomulae going so keep it up and make it stronger. Cool poem