Comments : Wedding Dreams

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very good poem, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Omgg that was soo very touching..If this is true, i'm really happy you felt that way..it's a great feeling to have! you did a wonderful job your rhymes flowed perfectlly!! 5/5

  • I love ur poem. it had a veri strong meaning to it keep it up. ull get far.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    Oh my lord, Darien, this poem is one of the most beautiful pieces of writing I have ever read. I know that probably sounded corny and crazy, but something about this poem made me cry. I hope that your dream really did come true, because it sounds like you really love her. Keep up the amazing works,
    Lia Jnell

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
    a beautiful and sweet poem. perfect for a wedding gift. u totily got my commplit attention. u can get the simpul and sweet things of love. wouderful job:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very very beautiful. i really like ur style. it flows so well. it's always good to see a male poet with so much skill. such a gift... at least ur using it : )
    congrats.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. this is such a beautiful poem, it has some amazing imagery. The flow and rhythm is really good and it's very sweet. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Your choice of words is great and really sets the mood. This is a lovely poem and shows how great it is when dreams do come true.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Aww. Cute love story. :) Great job. You have always been a great writer. That is why you have always been on my favorites list. :)

    >black&&blue

  • 17 years ago

    by 111308

    Awwww! Your An Amazing Love Poet! I Admire Your Work Now! You've Got Me Hooked And I Want To Read More! Brilliant..Just Brilliant I Enjoy Your Work So Much 5/5
    Love,
    Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    A gorgeous poem. Simply there is nothing more to say... I loved it, like always. Great job, Darien. You're an amazing writer.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bitt3rSw33t

    I love your rhymes....the wording you use...and the whole theme of your poems...simply amazing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brooke Amity

    This is really sweet!
    It isnt often you hear a guy dreaming about weddings.
    ..xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    ...A..m..a...z..i..n...g!!! Like wow, the words flow so easily, the meaning is amazing, and it has such a twisted eneding... you dont kno how its gonna end. Its heart breaking... but then happy. Absulotly amazing poem

  • 17 years ago

    by chelsa

    Awestruck. wonderful & beautiful! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by always in my heart

    Very beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow, another perfect poem from you. You are really one of the best poet in the site :| 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Khanyisile Cele

    That was well sad. Really romantic and sweet.

  • 16 years ago

    by rUby rOse

    Fantastic!!

  • 15 years ago

    by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs

    This was sooo cute
    i like it :)