I loved the title, and the last stanza was great! Its almost an Amityville horror type poem, which I love. Great writing, I cant wait to read the next one. Tim

BRAVO!!! this is what i call poetry right here,,,,,nice structure ,, perfect rhyming,,,deep story telling,,,,one the very best i have ever read,,,
keep it up ,, i mean it because no one writes like this exept if they have real talent and u sure do

Wow amazing job. I saw this poem under the contest page and although normally I dont comment on thoes I just had to leave a message for this one. This was so original and deep. I love the last verse, very intersting and powerful the sence of loss and sadness that seems to loom over this house is very amazing. Wonderful job. 5/5

All I can say is that I completely agree with everyone's comments ~ wow, what a well written poem!! Kept me in suspense until the very end ~ great job!

This is great and spookey and this also
reminds me of a movie amityville
horror i think that show you spell it
5/5 great

Comment #4:
How do you do it? It's exremely hard to make a double homicide/suicide sound beautiful...but your wording is so powerful. I really do love your work and this is just one more reason why you're on my favorites. Amazing job once again and of course 5/5! :)
~Midnight Sun

Absolutely Great!! That was awesome. I enjoyed it from the first line to the last. And it was so poignant and beautifully sad. Well done.