Oh my, That was really sad, i felt for the girl in this poem, it made me think alot too about love and what it means and how important it is.
well done
that was awesome
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This is a great poem!!! It is written very well and it just keeps you interested and It really makes you feel for the person in your poem! thanks for your comment on my poem. This poem is awesome!!! keep writing

-Lauren

This poem is soo good! but also really sad! well written keep up the amazing work! 5/5

OMG THiS WAS AMAZiNG!!!!
I simply have no other words to better define this kind of writing. It put me in tears ;; literally. You are a great writer. I know in your post you only asked for a couple commented on, but I feel now like going and reading every piece of writing you`ve ever written. I`m going to go r/r/c a bunch of your poems. You are such an amazing writer, and I hope you keep it up! You`ve got something special for sure.
AMAZiNG job!
5/5

Samantha Hollywood

Oh wow. It was very sad, but it was deep, emotions just poured out of it. Great job. 5/5

Oh wow. It was very sad, but it was deep, emotions just poured out of it. Great job. 5/5

Holy christ. like....woah

taht gave me incredibel shivers. i thought she was gonna use a knife adn cut herself but a gun. not only unexpected but also much more terrifying. totally digged it.