Great poem. It was well written and I thought you did a good job with the flow. I think the name of the poem fits well.

OOH I like this one. GREAT imagery. I could see the entire picture in my head. Flow was good also.

Title? Hmm...maybe something in relation to the window, since that holds most of the imagery and passion in the poem.

5/5

joy*:.xx

Bullet prrof glass?
proof*
i dunno.
i thin the titles a-ok
so yeah
anyway rock on
~Emah

I loved this. The imagry was GREAT. Maybe you could call it "Unknown Bullet" or I dunno. Lol. But I liked this poem. And the title isn't that bad either. It's great. Thank you for your comment aswell. Keep up the great work!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Great imagery, very beautiful. It flowed so well and kept me hooked until the end. I thought the title was perfect, Keep up your good work! 5/5

All I can say is... Wow

This was really good! I think it flowed smoothly which really made it a lot easier for the reader to comprehend. And, by the way, I think the title fits the writing just fine. =D Great work.

**Samantha Hollywood

Wonderful write. It flowed beautifully. I don't think you could improve this one in any way. Keep up the great work. 5/5