I like it a lot..i can totally realte and the line that was stated above hit home. i totally understand. greatkeep it up

Yet this dark poem is enlighting

It is a great poem, you have a point at first and you make your point by the time the poem is over, so great. 5/5

Hmm. This is a sad poem. And sadly I can relate. I keep alot of things from my best friends.

I thought you did great on this though. I don't see anything that should be changed. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Kind of sad but I can relate. You did a great job expressing your emotions. 5/5

Great poem. I can relate to it, not even best friends know everything.