I love it! same thing happend with my ex! (he was cheating on me with my best friend) and they made out in front of me! the only difference is that i hate him...

Nice ... thats almost like a burn to however it goes out to. i love it ... keep writing you rock

Love it!

Too many dirty words!!!
LOL!!!

You tell him girl.

Right on. nice way to shove it on his face. i hope that one day, you find that perfect person that will treat you like you deserve to be treated.

That was good keep up the good work!

Girl power..sweet....

Wow that is sooo good and it fits my life just the same way. and that kind of sh*t just happened to me the other day i like it a lot

Your poem eaches out to alot of people.mostly girls but it happens to everybody.it's part of life.but yeah it sucks.good job.please comment on mine.i would like to see what other people think of my writing.it's caled I SEE by bianca thanx

This is ight i like the detain in it and knoe what your talkin bout because these boys dont knoe whats gonna be hittin them

I guess all i can say is that stuff happens. revenge doesn't get you anywhere -- i can't agree with your poem. letting someone know how you feel is fine, but being b**** back is VERY unclassy. be classy.
-annie

Wat a poem, heart broken

Wow...that was Excellent. Brilliant. I loved it! :D Good job Whitney. ^^

WoW u go girl, this poem rocks,
that's what they get for actin as ashols

I have two words for ya!
it's great!!!!!!!!!

You go girl!!!! .

I loved this. Describes my ex perfectly =D

Girl I went through the same shit

I repeat everything that everyone else said and in a sum up ;
your writing is very powerful