Excellent poem 5/5. Keep it up there were a few forced rhymes in there but I stil give you a 5/5.

This is one of the best Ive read in a while very well written flow was perfect all around amazing you have a great talent :) 5/5

GOd Bless

-CHris

Cuz although I'm with you now, sometimes
it feels no different than before
[I felt those lines didn't go so well. You have 'cuz' ..I'm pretty sure you mean 'cause' ..and I felt that maybe you should add 'sometimes' to the other line.]

I thought the closing stanza was good. I liked it alot. Keep it up!

Natalie``

I liked this poem a lot, I can relate to it so I like it even more! great job

I liked the repeation of the title as this is a common feeling in relationships - is love enough to make things right.
The final stanza sums up the feeling of the poemnicely.

The repetition really added emphasis to the poetry. Again, the last stanza really showed the poems true potential, very well penned. You have a way with ending poems so perfectly, keep writing!

Peace. [Sole]

I liked how you used the title as the first line of each stanza.
Again this is about circumstances affecting the love life, it happens to so many people, (it's somewhat happening to me right now actually) and I think you wrote this poem well.
I have to be honest and say in places the rhymes were a tad predictable, which put me off slightly. Also I'd change "cuz" in the third stanza to " 'cause."
Not bad, I must say I prefer your other poem though. Thanks for sharing.

Wonderful poem. You bring up a lot of points, but I have the answers to all of them.

"I wonder now if love is enough
to combat the things that try
that tear apart my very ease
and make me want to give up and cry"

Love never hurts you, or makes you cry. Lust does. Lust covers itself up and pretends to be love. It feels the same way, but it will hurt you one day.

All of these questions are answered by, it was lust, not love. Don't give up on love, it's beautiful when you find it.

Wow----this poem has such a depth to it! It is so powerful with your word choice and the rhyme,,,I also thought that repitition of the line ''I wonder now if love is enough'' made the poem better-------Great work---5/5

Mmmm....sweet....sad...5/5

I'm sorry, but I disagree.

First off, I liked the rhyming scheme and you're a great poet. I'm judging off that and only that.

I'm in a long distance relationship and have been for a year and almost four months. If you truly love the person, it doesn't matter... You're love will always be there touch or not. Just don't give up if it's distance.. It's worth it, trust me.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

;(

intensely sad.
makes me want to cry.
I'm glad I've found such a talented poet as yourself.
~Emah 5/5

So true. Thanks for sharing.