So much emotion, so sad. i feel for u. 5/5
keep writing,
xxx

I told you i'd come find your poem

It was very emotive and heart felt
You did a wonderful job in expressing yourself
I know things will get better soon for you!
5/5
*Gem*

I'm sorry about what happened. The poem was wonderful. You wrote your emotions clearly, and it flowed very well. I love the ending, about being emotionally dead, not physically. Very well thought out and written. Keep up the great work! You have talent hun. =] 5/5

Hey there,
many thanks for your comment it made my day! this is a brilliant poem and you were right i did enjoy it! you have amazing tallent.
keep writing.
much love xo
Shae Radford ღ

Great poem u are very tallented

Wow.. I know exactly what you are going through. I just got out of a two year (almost) relationship a while ago & I absolutely loved your poem. Especially the last stanza about being "emotionally dead".. Amazing job on this! 5/5