Comments : Fairytale Heartbreak

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Great poem! glad I found your work.
    If you get a chance see if you like my others.

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, thanks for your comment on my poem! love this poem, espessialy the firts stanza! good work! love dying rose as well! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Awwww i can relate very great write good use of creativity
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    Nice poem. :)
    You started your poem well. And it flowed well too.
    Keep up the good work.
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Cale

    I really like this!! Lots of emotion and easy to relate to!! Great work!! Keep it up!! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    I love the flow of this poem.... Wonderful rhymes!!! Really cute as well.. I also used to believe in fairytales. lol...Can totally realate!!! God bless you dear poet!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-