Wow awsome poem a 5/5 for me!!
keep on writing!!

Cute poem with a slightly different style to a lot. Nice last stanza

I absolutely love this poem. It is filled with so much emotion and the title is really catchy too, just thought I'd let you know that. But the overall poem was amazing. I could relate to it so much. You expressed your emotions very well. Beautifully written! 5/5 Keep it up!

This is a really touching poem and is written really well. Keep it up!

"You're my angel and YOUR heart is my safe haven" ... "your" instead of "you're". :)

"To live a life THAT'S so incomplete"

Really enjoyed it but here are my comments: You get to the last two stanzas and it feels like you were in a hurry to end it or weren't sure how to end it. They're different from the rest of the poem, not nearly as descriptive, deep, meaningful, etc, and writing in a different pacing style. It's not BAD so much as... distracting from the poem and the meaning of the poem.

Waw...great poem..alot of emotion..very inchanting..its a poem full of emotion without a doubt .great job.

Very good poem... well expressed and i loved it!!! you described your feelings well!!! excellent work hun 5/5 from me ^^

xoxo Lucy

Awwww.. that was so sad.. but very sweet... the descriptions were good, the emotion was loud and clear, and the flow worked pretty well.. nice job! 5/5

I loved it. It has so much emotion in it. Great job 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

Yeah the rhyme was great and Others says it is great then I need to agree to them the feelings are there and thats the thing that a poem can be greatful nice job

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nice to meet you if you have time check out my poems also I am a fil too

Geneross

Such a sad tone to the poem..
made all the more sadder if you knew the story behind it..
but all the same, it's great!!

Aww! It's so cute! I loved it! =) It sounds a lot like me, in some ways. I like being able to resemble part of a poem. The flow was a little rocky in some parts, but it ended up good in the end. Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

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Um... Okay, I don't wanna be mean, but writing this at the end totaly destroyed the emotion that I built up after reading the poem. Just wanted you to know that you might consider taking that out for the sake of the emotional value of the entire poem. Otherwise, amazing write, 5/5

Wow i love it. i really can relate to this.. u have talent.. i like how it flows so perfectly. it was very fun getting to talk to you in the chatroom. thank you so much for commenting on my poem it means so much to me. wel ne ways amazing poem.. keep up the amazing work
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luve angie

I really like this one,
and I can relate too..
Good Job...

Aww, that was so beautiful that tears stirred in my eyes at it's closure. It was structured perfectly, with a flawless flow and powerful words. All things a poem needs to make it excellent! =]

I like this poem.. like the rhyme, and its full of emotion.. and can relate to it in a way... good job. x

Good job, great topic. You can still work on the flow

Definitly a keeeper, reeely good keep it up!

This was so sad.. least in my eyes and from waht I read it was, I really enjoyed it. I even read it twice, cause I felt I needed too.

"So as I write this
You're somewhere so far away
A place i can only reach
By loving you this way "

I can relate to those lines aswell, this makes it ten times more awesome than it already was.