I really liked this, it is different then your usual poem, but I loved it, I thought it was really good. I like how you structured it and it had a good flow to it.
Thank you for all the comments. (^_^)
5/5
Breanna

Hey its me......wats up....didnt u get tht comment or something....owell....ttyl i guess

Awwwwwwww......i liked it its a 5 4 me.......and i found someone!! not a girl...im not bi.....but hes really sweet thoughand ur rite it is goin 2 get better...

Great poem, it was very well written! keep it up! 5/5