AAWWWwww...so romantic! I love it! VERY well written...it goes right to the heart with it's deep meaning. GREAT job!! 5/5 :)

Nicely done and very well written.. From the one poem I've read you're a strong writer. Great discription yet very sad...Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

The flawless heavenly flow sheds light on the subject

OKay, I'm sitting here in awe....What a great poem!! Very well done!

Nice use of words; no phrase or word was over-used. This is really a nice flow and goes with the story and message quite well.

Overall nice job.

As always~ Kate

I liked this poem because it's so sweet but it's also sad, and well written. My favorite part was the first stanza, it was a good beginning for your poem.

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

WOW.........there is no critisism needed here it is a great poem! Really it was awesome...

-annmarie

Driver --
Aww, this was so cute! I loved it ;; nothing was forced, and the rhyming worked out really well. You`re a great writer, I can`t wait to read your other poem! The grammar and spelling in this poem, as well, was perfect. That`s the first thing I look for, you never want to get caught with bad grammar! Lol, have a wonderful day. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Awww.. this was very sweet! the descriptions were detailed and very beautiful.. the flow and the rhymes worked well.. excellent job! 5/5

Well done, i did enjoy it, it was sweet, loving and flowed well. with good imagery, making it lovely
xxxxxx

A nice romance poem, greatly written

Very good, sweetie. Not knowing how to read this, I read it as I felt myself.. It's a bit like the horoscopes.. you can always fit it to yourself, because it's so full of words that can have duplicate meanings.. I mean this in a positive.. This should appeal to many readers, as it can be related to in different ways, all equally as deep. Well done. xx

Very sweet and romantic. The words could send multiple messages into anyone's heart, and that I felt was the beauty of your words. Keep up your good work! xxx

Awww!!! it was really a heart felt poem! donno what to say! you are a good writter and have the talent!

keep it up!

Wow
it was so romantic and from the heart.more guys should be like you:D
--lexie

This was a really deep poem...i loved the way u worded everything...it made me feel sad..yet i felt hope..it was a great write keep it up!