Wow, you're beautiful and poetic! Love you, Mel.

Really good job!! ur an awesome writer!!!
Amanda

Very lovely. Thanks for sharing. :)

An awesome poem, please keep writing. you have talent, keep it up, my friend
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Excellent job. this one seems to flow nicely, and i really liked readin it. keep em comin.
Driver

Awwww how sweet, the flow was excellent and you explained it all in such detail!!! fantastic job! keep it up and another 5/5 from me =)

xoxo Lucy

Another great poem here.it is a sweet poem

What I return to is so much more
Than the ice and snow that I abhor
A country between us, I finally see
How much your love has meant to me
That was my absolute favorite part. I loved the whole poem, and the meaning of it. Great job on this! The rhythm, rhyming, flow, it was all very good and held up well with no problem. Great job on this! 5/5

The is proof that you can use a rhyme scheme throughout a poem without it sounding forced. the flow is gentle and the diction is even and lacks any oppressive tones which helps me to feel like I'm sat in the back seat looking out the window and looking for state plates of cars passing by looking forward to seeing my old haunts, friends and family.

A very pleasing poem.

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I really liked that! It is one that I can relate to soooooo much and i can finally see in words how I was feeling. Thank you!

I never really liked being away from home. I think I would get home sick. Unless I moved out on my own, but I could never leave my city. A really nice poem, you allowed the reader to enter your shoes and view things from your perspective. Very nice rhymes as well.

This was lovely and sweet. Your vocab choice really brings the images to life.
It flowed really well and hey it even rhymed in places lol.
Keep up the great work

I liked this, it was sort of full of mystery in the beginning for me... And then you reveal the truth in the end, wonderful... i commend you on this poem 5/5