This is a fantastic piece.I haven't seen such a unique style like this in a long time(sort of abstract/surreal in a way).Every line is wonderful, amazing.I am so impressed with the way you wrote this poem.It is open to so many interpretations and meanings, and yet it retains such emotion.The 3rd stanza is really great, but it is the ending stanza(the last two lines) that really has such a powerful impact.I look forward to reading more of your work.

I'm with Gary on this one, truly a fantastic piece... I really love the second stanza, though the whole piece is incredible! Excellent work, Libby!

Yeah great piece i cant say anything just awesome

and btw thanks for your comment that really help me and i tried to change that if I already think any line lols

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