Wow u really are an amazing writer!

Wonderful. This had such a smooth flow. I loved the hopeful ending and the final stanza was definately my fave.

Flowed so smoothly, words caught me, very sad, i loved it all. really good
xxxxx

A very nice and unique kind of poem, well written.this stanza really captured my attention
Her first steps are taken with fear,
Holding everything she finds dear.
Passion is her guide to a new place,
Hoping she sees the mysterious face.
great job again.5/5

Wow!!! I loved this piece!!! I also wanted to say thanx for commenting on my poems!!! My favorites lines were

"The force of his hand left the scar,
Now her trust is held away too far."

Wow!!!! Great Write!! Flow, rhyme outstanding!! Keep it up!! 5/5!!!

~Lois

"In her HEAR it left its warm mark."
is that supposed to be heart? lol

otherwise i really enjoyed the poem.. i didnt see any flaw in it. :)

Aww this is a really well written poem.. Very strong and wonderful. I'm not sure what to say, but it was very inspiring. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

That was a good written poem!

You got the tallent in writting poems! i loved this poem alot,,, to me it flowed very well...

I loved the ending it was amazing!

thanks for the comment on my poems, it means alot to me!

This is a very unique poem that is why i like it...to me it flowed very well! AND the ending was very strong and BEAUTIFUL!

Passion is her guide to a new place,
Hoping she sees the mysterious face.--loved these lines!!

5/5

Very different and beautiful. Your words are simple yet they hold a powerful and deep message. I liked this unique structure and idea. Keep up your great work! xxx

Excellent Ending!! Definatly left me with nothing to say!! Love poems that make me feel like that!!! Wonderful Job ...5/5
-Krissey

Awww, it was so beautifully written! Your words described a sad and true story at the beginning and then the end was so amazing! It took my breath away! I loved it!
"...Each new breath dries her tears,
Saying goodbye to forgotten fears.
Trust now holds her tired heart,
As she journeys through the start. "
^^It was such a beautiful ending to what seemed to be a sad poem! Great work, my friend. Keep writing...
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Pst: Thank you very much for commenting on my poems! It means a lot that you offered to!

Very well done, I really enjoyed the flow and content of this poem. I loved it. 5/5 Loretta