Wow. That was really good. Nice poem, great visual.

-Jennifer.

Very good poem.i hope it didn't happen 2 u

Wow that was an excellent poem, very sad, but well written. your a very good writer and i enjoy reading your poetry.
5/5

xx rachel xx

Its a sad poem. Firstly watch your language, its better not to rhyme then to rhyme badly such as "I am froze!". Also it should be "praying" in the first line not "preying". Keep writing and practicing your skills.

WOW!! I don't know what to say..It left me speechless...I really hope that didn't happen to you..If it did I am so so sorry..You are an awesome writer though.This poem made me sad because the way you wrote it..You could just picture everything..You did an amazing job writing this..5/5 for sure..
keep up the good work,
your friend,
Crystal

I'm really sorry...if this is true im SOOOO sorry! Nobody deserves that kind of treatment...im praying for u...5/5 :)

Omg..this is sad,but good.5 for sure

Even though the situation is sad and nobody should have to go through that, it made a good poem and it was very well written! keep writing (thanks for the comment by the way) Dan xxx

OMG Hun, that brought tears to my eyes....very good way to get emotions out though.

Kristy this was an amazing poem!! amazing!! 5/5 ! so much talent in ur work!! stay strong

Wow!

this is a great poem even though it may be about a very sad event.

it is so cruel to think that things like this actually happen in this world...wat are people thinkin???

so many emotions!!

great job

and thanx heeps for the comments! it made my day! :)

keep writing!

sophie

Ohh Wow. 5/5
It's wonderful.
Quite sad.
Sorry, dear.
Lovely write.

That was the saddest poem i think i've ever read!! just tell me that that didnt happen to you?

I'm very amazed by your imagination,and how youown the courage to even think of it,
wooooow!!!!
incredible you are,
although the character was in this hard position, you still could make it say the words in very good ryhm
i like it and more cheerly poems to come i hope
your friend
laminos

Wow. -OO- that's wow. that's mean. but i really liked how'd u did the poem.
thankz for the comments

That is really good. really really good.

~Ter.

That was crazy. which is a compliment :P .but yea . ohh man i hate sick #### like that. nicely written.

anasha . x

WHOA!!! dang!! amazing! lots of talent babe!!!
5/5

Never ever i should not vote a poem like this..i mean..how it can be good coz it telling horrible things..Anyway I voted it, 5/5. Coz..even it is just something u only wrote..it touched me so much..I lived in real life in a hell, just like that and it's always hard to..

Anyway, i wanted to say..Ur poem is horrible..but in a good way..If u got what i mean?

Viv

Wow that was a very powerful poem.... I loved the way you wrote it....keep up the great writting!!!