It is a good poem! loved how you wrote it! and it flowed real good!

Keep it up!

Oh hun, that's terrible. It's even worse that you got your heart broken the first time, then again. It's hard enough to give it away again after getting it broken, let alone doing it for it to be broken again. I'm sorry it happened to you. You wrote an excellent poem out of it though. Pure emotion is the best to write off. Great poem. =] 5/5

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Once again it's the whole thoughts thing I was talking about in the other comments.

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