Woooahh! such a deep poem, the father part was a big twist too, loved the ending, this is a sad poem, but you wrote it so well.. great write, keep it up 5/5..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..Best Wishes..Kirsty Palmer xx

Depth, is amazing.. though you might want to spell check it. Some people tend to rate poems low if they don't spell things correctly. Nice work.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.6/5

Hey just wirting back , umm i cant get over he was my first love and i know i wont not get over we been together since we were 5 yrs old yea we were child sweethearts so i wont get over but great poem and i am sorry about ur fathers death
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Sarah

This is an awesome poem, 5/5 you deserve no less. I loved the rhyming it flowed very smoothly great job!

Deep.... very deep.... check out those funky charaxters though. 5/5

Its very well rhimed and very well written but i think it is a bi hard to follow for dumb blones like me :P well done keep up the goosd work i will give it a 4 !!

Woah.. so deap and so sad, but such a great job. Nice work. Keep it up. =]