I like poems that are well expressed keep it up :):) i always say 2 people when commenting put metaphors in your work to make it better but this already has what i like in a poem :):)

Plz comment on some of my poems as i like as much feedback as poss :):) thnx xxx alex xxxx

A very nice writting style, great job. keep up the best job up.5/5

This is beautiful, Melissa.Such emotion and love.Excellently expressed.It says so much.I love the last line.

Gary Jurechka