Comments : Back to the Beginning

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Whoa this is wierd. But a good wierd. It's like the erasing of a canvas that could symbolize humantiy.. at least that's my interpretation on it. I also really like the descriptions and imagery on this poem. Very weel written!!

    Take Care,
    Sarah-Joy xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This is really good. I absolutely loved the way you did it. My interpretation of it is: IF ONLY WE COULD START ANEW. Very profound message.