I liked it a lot except... well, it wasnt really a poem. At least, it wasn't written in poetry format. But I liked it none the less. 5/5

I like that...
alot...
lol...
reading it just helped me make a final decision about something im gonna do to get away from my household life...
for about mby a week...
but anyways...
i wouldnt change anything in it...
good job:)
Kathleen...

The format is not real poemy type....lol
but i just love teh idea and whats wqritten tehre

I agree, very true indeed, this poem rings the bell to the meaning of life..
Goody work!
keep on writing on what u feel and like!

God Bless!

Very good ,,I like the way you wrote this poem out,,it was a discovery,,,,,
but ,,some opportunities are there to seize you..go with truth..

I feel exactly the same way. When you think about how you may not live to see tomarrow, even the littlest things are a big deal. 5/5

So true, i say that to myself everyday but you put in a way more beautiful way, i love it 5/5

This seems more of a very short summary about what life is about... more thatn a poem.. but the thoughtfulness words that were choosen.. is yet so pwerful good job.. 4/5

Live life day by day and love each and everyday like you will die tomorrow...i like it its all the truth 5/5 always Manda

I couldn't have said it better myself. You put a large amount of emotion into so little words. I felt each and every word as I read it. This was really wonderful. You are a very talented poet. Keep up the good work.

Awesome thought..
it was definitely worth the read..and it enlightened me..
thanks for that..
keep up the good work. :)

Very wise!! maybe break it up into stanza's though it would help it look more professional and like an actual poem! other than that i think it was a very insightful and true poem! The fact of life is that we are given one chance to live it up and make it count. You will make mistakes and shed tears but why live your life in a boring or upset state? enjoy what you can!!! ok im done now lol : ) great job! 5/5