Comments : Forgotten Chance

  • 17 years ago

    by *unpredictable*

    It was incredible!! a real tear jerker. you have so much emotion in it, it's like you're mad at the person, i guessed, but at the same time, you're so sad to let go. i know how u feel! it was soo good!! omg!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Car,
    The emotional sadness your words portray leave me in search of tissue . Mercy! Car, you have created a piece so incredibly touching .
    Hope all is well M'dear .

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This makes me sad Car :-( I hate feeling so crummy like this girl, I hate it with a passion!! Your words really draw your readers into feeling how your feeling, I'm going to agree with Luanne on the tissue thing...even in your sad writes though, excellent wording!
    ~Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Sick.&.Tired.Of.Waiting

    Whose this about, Car? Its sooooo sad but at the same time beautiful...aww. Girl! i love you!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow... i can see what you mean... amazing poem though hun and i hope you're alright. i'm going ok, although it's tough... i really thought i was ready to love again, but i guess i wasn't. but other than that, things are great. still playing my sports :P and schools ok. 10 more weeks and the semester's over (im in cegep). so yeah, im pretty much doing ok. how about you?
    it was really good to hear from you again hun. i really missed reading your poems. stay strong and take care,
    -xXx-

  • 17 years ago

    by JamesP

    My head was shouting too...